"The p-cycle protection is important for us because of its two features..."

Question

​سلام دوستان میشه اگر جایی از این متن ترجمه روان و صحیحی نداره رو اصلاح بفرمایید.متشکرم

The p-cycle protection is important for us because of its two features. It has a short recovery time and also a p-cycle can protect not only the links that are on-cycle but also those that straddle it.

Answer 1

سلام - بنظر بنده اگر محور موضوع در متن شما P-cycle است , بهتره خط دوم رو اینطور بنویسید :

The p-cycle protection is important for us because of its two features. It has a short recovery time and also can protect not only the links that are on-cycle but also those that straddle it.

اگر هم برنامه نرم افزاری protection که برای p-cycle استفاده می شه موضوع محوریه , چون اون two features به اون برمی گرده ,  بهتره خط دوم رو اینطور بنویسید :

The p-cycle protection is important for us because of its two features. It has a short recovery time and also can enable the cycle to protect not only the links that are on-cycle but also those that straddle it.