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من از نسخه پرمیوم گرامرلی برای نوشتن مقاله ام استفاده میکنم.

یک سوال در خصوص passive voice ها داشتم.

در متنی که نوشتم گرامرلی به برخی جملات پسیو که نوشته ام اشکال گرفته است و ذکر میکند که بایستی به صورت اکتیو نوشته شود. مثلا جمله زیر را اشکال گرفته است. به نظر شما می شود اینچنین جملات را به صورت active voice نوشت؟

In this section, the file is defined, and the case is created.

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اگه ممکنه جمله پیشنهادی گرامرلی رو هم بزارید لطفا

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جمله پیشنهادی نمیده. ولی پیام زیر را میده.

This sentence appears to be written in the passive voice. Consider writing in the active voice. 

Passive voice is not a grammatical error, but a style choice. In general, active voice is the preferred style of most readers. With the active voice, the subject performs the action. This style can provide more clarity, brevity, responsibility, or certainty than passive voice. If the active voice makes sense, use it. 

Passive: The mayor was informed of the accounting errors.

Active: Mr. Jones informed the mayor of the accounting errors. (adds clarity)

Active: The mayor was aware of the accounting errors. (adds responsibility)

 

In the passive voice, the actions are performed upon the subject by someone or something else. When the subject is more important than the actor, the passive voice is a useful style.

Passive: The graduated cylinder was filled with 750 ml of the solution. (no actor)

 

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به نظر من همانطوری خودتان نوشتید بهتر است اصلا لزومی نداره که اینجا فاعل مطرح بشه

E.g

In this section: I/Dr. Mr. .... (have/has) defined the file and created the case.

Answer 1

the file is defined,
They/ It defines the file


the case is created
They/ It creates the case