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Contamination levels in  water can greatly affect surface water toxicity and, thus, the health of aquatic ecosystems. Such a these contaminatios is manganese pollution which have detrimental effects on freshwater aquatic organisms (Reimer, 1988) and neurotoxic health. As a result neurotoxic effects of Mn2+ in children have been reported at more than 100 μg L-1

 

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Such contaminations are... (article 'a' and 'these' need to be omitted)

Use a comma after 'As a result'

 

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