درمتن زیر PUNCTUATION و افعال زمانی به درستی استفاده شده؟

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آیا در متن زیر زمان افعال و استفاده از punctuation  ها به درستی رعایت شده؟ 

 

At earlier age of curing, due to lack of sufficient cementation in samples containing more lime, increase of compressibility of the soil skeleton, led to the decrease of B value, additionally, in length of curing, with saturation of open-channel structure of lime and as a consequence of stiff samples’ compressibility reaching to the compressibility of water, it led to the decrease of B value.