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Question

زیرا امروزه سازمان‌هایی در عرصه رقابت موفق‌ترند که به‌گونه‌ای مدیریت و هدایت شوند که نوآوري و ارتقاي سطح کیفی محصولات تبدیل به بخشی از فعالیت روزانه سازمان و جزء مهمی از فرهنگ آن شود. 

Because nowadays, organizations that are managed and guided in a way that innovation and product quality improvement are routine and an important part of their culture are more successful in the area of competition.

Answer 1

خوبه ؛ فقط بهتره اون قسمتش را اینطور بنویسید : 

 

............in a way that innovation and 

 product quality improvement become part of  the routine / daily activities of the organization and (also) an important part of its culture , are more successful in the area of competition.