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Question

. این اثردرتاریخ 22 اردیبهشت 1380مطابق با 2004/02/28 باشماره ثبت 854788 به‌عنوان یکی ازآثارملی ایران به ثبت رسیده است.

 

_{^{It   has been registered as a national monument of Iran}}

_{^{on March 28th 2004(solar year 1382/2/22) ,the}}

_{^{registration number is 854788 .}}

Answer 1

this artwork/ ... with the registration number 854788

... under the registration number 3456345

Answer 2

It has been registered as an Iranian National/Historical monument No 854788, dated 2004-03-28 (1382/2/22).

(not sure about DATE format)

^{Let's see what others suggest.}