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Question

Hi Sara apologize me last night. I've annoyed you a lot last night.I got call you an old woman but you aren't an old woman ,you are a young girl and so beautiful who every man has desire to marry with you.I repeat my apologize and I hope you forgave me and I promise won't tease you.

 

Answer 1

با سلام

لازم بود متن فارسی را هم قرار می دادید تا بهتر منظور تان را متوجه شویم. بهرحال ترجمه پیشنهادی من بقرارذیل می باشد:

Hi Sara

-I hope that you would forgive me for something that happened last night.

-I would apologize for something that happened last night.

I know that I hurt your feeling by calling you an old woman, honestly you are a very young beautiful girl whom every man wishes to marry.

I would repeat my apologies and hope that you have forgiven me and I promise that I won't bother you anymore.

 

Comments

Hi

I guess "beautiful young girl" is correct

take a look at this page about order of adjectives in English

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/adjectives/order-adjectives

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Thanks a lot for your correction .

 

Answer 2

Hi

This is the correct form:

"Hi Sara I apologize for last night.

I annoyed you a lot last night.

I called you an old woman, but you aren't an old woman ,

you are a young girl and so beautiful that

every man desires to marry you.

I repeat my apology and I hope you have forgiven me

and I promise not to tease you anymore."