چک کردن چند جمله

Question

سلام

ممنون می شوم بررسی کنید این جملات از لحاظ گرامی و انتخاب کلمات مناسب هستند

دید و ذهنم ما با بازی های کامپیوتری گسترش می یابد  و تجربیات زیادی به دست می آوریم که قبلا در موردشون فکر نکرده بودیم.

Our view and mind are extended by video games to gained a lots of new experiences  that we've never thought about them before

آنها ما رو محدود به انجام کارهای مشخصی بدون کوچکترین تحرکی می کنند

They limit us to do some specific work/activities/acts without any movements

ما می توانیم هوای آزاد طبیعی را تنفس کنیم

we can breathe natural air 

و جمله روبه رو شدن با ترافیک (من با ترافیک روبه رو شدم)

ممنونم از لطفتون

 

Answer 1

Hi,

Our view and mind can be developed through video games and likewise we can gain new experiences which we had not thought about before.

They restrict us to do some certain tasks without having / allowing us to have a single movement.

We can breathe fresh air.

I was faced with traffic.

I got stuck in traffic.

 

Answer 2

Hi,

  while I know that the young are intimately involved in Video games nowadays, to the detriment of their mental and physical health,but I try to give you a leg-up:

* we can develop our mind and standpoint by playing Video games and gain wide experience that hadn't been thought of yet.

* Such games put a brake on us to do specific activities without any physical movement.

*We can suck/gulp in pure and fresh air.

* I faced the traffic

Comments

Hi ,

I liked.+1

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از لطفتون یه دنیا متشکرم

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Hi,

Thanks +