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ممنون می شوم بررسی بفرمایید که از لحاظ معنی و گرامر صحیح نوشته ام

I think my parents have inspired me to be successful and they have shown me the right way in my life. Actually I owe my enthusiasm for reading to my mother and my efforts to my father.In addition when I was a child, I haven't gained anything without reading a part of a news paper or a a book and it caused That I have enjoyed reading.furthermore my father has made a lots of efforts and tried more for us to feel comfortable and make us happy.I have gotten inspired from their idea & activities that I have seen since I was a child

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Answer 1

2nd line: put a comma after Actually.

3rd line: put a comma after in addition. Change "I haven't gained" to "I didn't gain."

I do not understand what you want to say in the sentence beginning in the 3rd line. Please clarify your meaning.

4th line: connect two words "news" and "paper" together. That is change it to "newspaper."

again the 4th line: change "That" to "that."

5th line: change "furthermore my" to "Furthermore, my."

a lots of -> a lot of or lots of

tried more for us to feel comfortable and make us happy -> tried so that we feel comfortable and happy.

I have been inspired by their ideas and activivities ...

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