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Hello Mrs Sharon 

It’s our great pleasure to be this year with you along and we hope our son can extremety enjoy of his school life and be one of the best student in your classroom,God bless you...

Cheers 

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فکر میکنم اشکال گرامری داشته باشید

It’s our great pleasure to be with you  this year and we hope our son can extremely enjoy his school age and be one of the best students in your classroom,God bless you...

 

 

 

Answer 1

 

... to be in your class this year

Enjoy: نیازی به حرف اضافه نداره. به تنهایی کافی

...one of the best students 

we hope our son.... and will be...

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