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This diary back to time, when I graduated and early started to work in Ahvaz, a youth in New job and looked for oppurchanity to spend more time for things that exciting and amusing himself.
One day afternoon in free time, when riding motorcycle to around big and beauty grand hotel beside KAROON river, meet a group foreign Austria tourist who were rambling through the park.
Indeed That youth it was me, after saying hello to them ask them about whether they know English or not.
One of them was heading to me and is like:
"No no no"
I asked them again and I am like :
      "where are you from?"
The guy is like : "osteria"
 I am like :     "sprechen sie deutsch" 
 He's like :    "Ya"
Now I was getting confuse to keep going and I go : 
"phew, But now I don't know well Deutch
languages"
The guy asked me to hold on and yelled loudly to come over the very younger travellmate who was being better in English.
New guy was coming to me with smile and cool face giving me five and after saying hello started to talk with me and said :
   "I wonder to how we can find drink here" 
Me like:  " sorry here is forbiden that stuff" 
     "oh, it's so bad, and what about frao" 
( l knew clearly that mean was lady or chic, in second desire were being requesting.) 
I tell them again and like :
"sorry here is forbidden that stuff" 
And I expressed them our people generally do travel to them place  for achieve those things. And all of them heeded me eagerly and carefully. And they were pleasure to find me and understand New thing of iranian culture. Sometimes they whispered in ears to gather and were laughing and sometimes weird and smiling. 
A little After my says about are over for finishing
I told them a magnificent Deutsch quote that related to first them requesting about win. I like :
"bier auf wein lass Das sein win auf bear radish dir" 
The first some of them noticed pretty well that what I was gonna to say and were starting to laugh loudly and show me to the others and wanted me to repeat again that deutsch quote
With my east accent. They were getting so surprized and I could understand well that how much they were feeling to explore me as appearing new phenomena at their destination. 
They were gathering tighter and yelled at others group to catch up and were listening to me. 
I also have to say my word again and again several times and they were laughing and enjoying more and more. 
At last after we had so fun by visiting when I wanted to say them bye I announce them by completely beautiful German quote :
"wer zuletzt lacht lacht am besten" 
They were crunching getting belly and laughing hard again and again with loudly load sound. 
They were confused with meticulous native languages

 

Answer 1

This diary goes back to the time when I graduated and started to work in Ahvaz as a young person in a new job and looked for an opportunity to spend more time on things that were exciting and amusing to me.

One day, in the afternoon, in my free time, while riding my motorcycle around the big and beautiful grand hotel beside KAROON river, I meet a group of foreign Austrian tourists who are walking in the park.

That young person was me, after saying hello to them, I ask them if they know English.
One of them comes to to me and is like:

"No no no"

I ask them again and I am like :

      "Where are you from?"

The guy is like : "osteria"

 I am like :     "sprechen sie deutsch"

 He's like :    "Ya"

Now, I am starting to get confused as to whether I should continue and I continue like this: 

"But I'm not good at Dutch."
 
The guy asks me to hold on and calls the youngest traveler in their group, who was better in English, to come over.

The new guy comes to me with a smile, gives me five, and after saying hello starts to talk to me and says:

   "I wonder how we can find alcoholic drinks here"

I'm like:  "Sorry, that stuff is forbidden here."

 
     "Oh, that's not good, and what about frao"

(l knew that word meant lady or chic) 

I repeat myself and I'm like :

"Sorry, that stuff is forbidden here."

 
And I explain to them that our people generally travel to their countries  for those kinds of things. They all listened to me eagerly and carefully. They were glad to have found me and to learn something new about the Iranian culture. Sometimes, they whispered in each others' ears to come together and they laughed and sometimes they were weird and smiled. 

Shortly after I was finished, I told them a magnificent Dutch quote that was about their asking for wine. I'm like:

"bier auf wein lass Das sein win auf bear radish dir" 

At first, some of them realized what I was going to say and started to laugh loudly and pointing in my direction and asked me to repeat the Dutch quote.

With my eastern accent, they were surprised and I had a feeling like they wanted to get to know me better as a new phenomenon in their destination. 

They gathered together and asked the others in their group to catch up and continued to listen to what I had to say.

 
Moreover, I had to repeat myself several times and they were laughing and enjoying more and more. 

At last, after having a lot of  fun, when I wanted to say good-bye to them, I quoted a really beautiful German quote:

"wer zuletzt lacht lacht am besten" 

The laughed even more. 

They were confused with meticulous native languages.

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