Dangling modifier

Question

•They remained imperturbable under heavy fire.

•When their vessels were loaded, they dashed back to England.

•Once unloaded, they did not vacillate, but returned with equanimity to their vigil in the danger zone.

•The British proved once again that they are paragons of comradeship in times of jeopardy.

توی قسمت بولد شده dangling نداریم؟ - اونا که خالی نشدن آخه - کشتی هاشون خالی شده

 

Answer 1

آره معرف معلق یا همون dangling modifier هست. برای اینکه جمله اصلاح بشه، باید نوشت Once the vessels were unloaded

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