Question

while the ultimate aim is one of curing the disease , this has to be balanced against the ability of the child and family to tolerate all components of management.

به نظر شما قسمت while the ultimate aim is on of curing the disease مشکل گرامری ندارد ؟ اگر پاسخ منفی است لطفا توضیح بدهید . 

 

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Answer 1

ساختار، مشکلی ندارد و of درست به کار رفته.

نمونه:

Eat, Pray, Love is not the first book of its kind, but it is a perfect example of the genre of priv-lit: literature or media whose expressed goal is one of spiritual, existential, or philosophical enlightenment contingent upon women's hard work, commitment, and patience, but whose actual barriers to entry are primarily financial.

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