"لطفا این مطلب رو تصحیح بفرمایید"

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سلام دوستان 

لطفا اشتباهات این متن رو تصحیح بفرمایید.

خیــــــــــــلی ممنون.

منم بچه که بودم مامان بزرگم منو برد پیش یه خانومه که تو گوش سوراخ کردن ماهر بود،که گوشمو سوراخ کنه یادمه اون خانومه خونه نبود بجاش عمه­ ش داوطلب شد که این کارو واسم انجام بده وقتی اومدیم خونه دیدیم به طرز واضحی ﻣﺤﻞ ﺳﻮﺭﺍﺥ ﻫﺎ ﻧﺎﻣﺘﻘﺎﺭﻥ بود دوباره رفتیم پیش یه آدم ماهر تا میزونشون کنه. 

چون دیگه گوشواره ننداختم تو اون سوراخ قبلی خود به خود بسته شد.

It happened to me too,when I was a child my grandmother took me to a woman who was professional in ear piercing,but she was not at home,instead her aunt became volunteer to do that for me I remember that when we got home, we noticed that both holes were obviously uneven, so we went to a professional person to make them even.

Because I left the previouse hole without an earring in it closed by itself(spontaniously).

 

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فقط انگار "که گوشمو سوراخ کنه " رو حذف کردید که شاید به دلیل اینکه از جمله قبل برداشت میشه . 

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بله درست می فرمایید...متشکرم

Answer 1

سلام - در کل خوب و مفهوم رسان ترجمه کرده اید. +1 . فقط punctuation لازم داشت که بنده بشرح زیر انجام دادم :

It happened to me too,when I was a child my grandmother took me to a woman who was professional in ear piercing to pierce my ears,but she was not at home and instead, her aunt became volunteer to do that for me. I remember that when we got home, we noticed that both holes were obviously uneven. So, we went to another professional person to make them even. / levelled.

Because I left the previouse hole without an earring in, it was closed by itself(spontaniously) / naturally.

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Thanks a bunch...

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Always welcome.